Forever Last

Painting this portrait of memories
Hiding behind this curtain of fairy
As I pleaded for help or simply ask for a gentle mercy.

My life is slipping
As my heart is swelling and burning
In flames and forever choking
Into this darkness of antagonizing feelings
Of hopeless and sadness ending.

Painting this portrait of rage
Fighting behind this anger and out of this cage
As I pleaded once again to vanish from this maze.

As my journey started...
Young and vulnerable, I planted this seed with no sense of direction
Floating from side to side of the intersection
Nor really I know where would it lands or fades away from its orientation ?
Far away, from it's reflection,
Have I discovered the truth and beauty
Of sour and sweet of the outcome of tis green tree !
Nor will I ever see,
Its real inner state as I painted this master-pee.

Again, struggling and struggling
To end this misery and pain
Completing tis not nor have I gain ?
The tears and the sadness through my veins
Of once a beauty and peacefull paint!

Painting this portrait at last
Closer and closer step to my past
As the hours turned into this hour-glass
A quick glance, and may our hope forecast
For better or worst of tis slim gleam
Of all my love for thy and I for dream!

Florence

"As my heart is swelling and burning
In flames and forever choking..."
Look like you need to see a cardiologitst, Florence!
Love your poems but hate to see you this way...!

C.

CareAboutYou: :p 911 is needed huh Thanks for your advice! Have a nice day !

Florence

Nice.....................

Florence, smile today and you will see a better tomorrow.

A PLEDGE TO THEE

Painting this portrait of sorrow
Painting this image of a broken dove
I hear your cry among the crowd
I feel the pain you went through and here is my prayer to the clouds above

My plead for thee, to end this misery
Florence, a divine and mystery
Out there among the castaways, feeling hopeless and lonely
Reaching to her is my plea to let her go free

Free will and soul
Release her from this burden
Release her from this endurance
Release her from this suffering

Reaching out to you to see
Extending my arms to thee
Giving you the comfort to be
"Adieu au passe' " , and come to me.

A new life, a new opportunity knocking at your door,
A beautiful glimpse at the sunrise
A wonderful treat at the sunset
Overall, a new horizon on your path.

chung_tuky

Hi Chung_tuky: Thanks for the nice poem!

HARVEST OF LOVE

Painting this portrait of tomorrow
I see hope and no more sorrow
I see your face and natural glow
I see your smile, roses and bows.

Living in the past, has no meaning
No desire nor aspiration
No feeling nor sensation
Though memories are still there, but what's left is thin as string.

Having you now in my life
Is leaving in paradise
Feeling just right,
As if there would never be another strife.

Promiss me, you will cherish
Our seed of love
Promiss me, you will embellish
Nurture and grow

As for me,
Pledging my love for thee
Is endless and you will see
What's the future will hold and never flee.

My love for you is like a river
That goes on and on forever
For you my love, I surrender
Longing to hold each other, and both vow to one another!

Florence

It's not nice if you guys just PM each other after this, Florence and Chung_tuky!

You 're such a nice girl, Florence!

C.

florence & chung_tuky...

nice poem...

<<My love for you is like a river
That goes on and on forever
For you my love, I surrender
Longing to hold each other, and both vow to one another!>>

sometime if you have courage enough...

Hi CareAboutYou and anhlaido, thank you bro and sis for your support to Florence. She is fantastic, isn't she? A very creative mind writer. I admire her challenge.

Chung_tuky

Greetings CareAboutYou: "Assumption" is one thing but "verification" is needed.

Florence

Anhlaido: You truly read my mind...poetry is one thing but in reality...is another thing ! Smile

Florence

Hi Chung_tuky: That's so sweet of ya, thank you for the great compliments. You're my challenge as well :p .

Florence

Florence, I really like the last verse the most. :p

"My love for you is like a river
That goes on and on forever"


However, I can't put my thoughts together.
I need more time Flo. Sweet dreams my dear.

Chung_tuky

Take your time, Chung_tuky! We know how you feel now and it's OK!
C.

Greetings CareAboutYou Nice to see ya here!

Greetings Chung_tuky: :p Have a nice day!

Florence

Florence, it's nice to see you back on your trail!

Always....

I'm still here, browsing from site to site
Still crunching in my sadness and living in denial
There is no glympse of happiness without you by my sight
The sense of motionless and powerless within might

Is it me the reason why?
Is it me you live or die?
Is it for me, which you shred your tears and cry?
Or was I there to replace your shinning armor once gone by.

It's so hard to let you go,
But it's now time to move on slow.
Crumbling in words to write this rhyme, a gesture to show
That my heart for you will forever grow!

Regardless how we may end
Florence, my mystery pen-friend then,
Will always stay in my heart forever,
As my love for you is an endless river!

chung_tuky

Chung_tuky: Greetingsssssss to ya my dear! It's nice to see ya

Florence

Florence, where have you been lately?

Wondering....where you are!

Typing endlessly, wondering where you are!
Feeling crushed inside of me, I may have lost you forever my lilttle star
Reaching out my soul, searching for something so far
Wondering if I would ever heal from this gentle scar.

On this summer day,
As the long hours turn into this cold windy night!
The crystal tear shatters into this emptiness
The memories radiate through this loneliness
No trace of you to be found, and sole I, sinking into this darkness
Along with the sorrows and the sadness!

Thoughts of you are now so far away,
Unspoken words floating on its castaway
Wonderful memories and lyrics slipped through all the pain
But my love for you will always remain.

Burying this obituary of my heart,
Sending thee this last kiss wrapped in this 'card',
Memories locked up forever through our tears
And vanished with time to the unknown world of fears.

chung_tuky

Chung_tuky: :p Greetings...I'm still here, though far or near...your threads I've read...seem so sincere.

LOVE IN A MIST

Drowning into this passion
It’s a magical sensation
A powerful running stream on commotion
An amazing glare of perfection

Yesterday sweet memories
As innocent as pure as white lilies
Floating over the water
As we vow our love as endless river.

(Asking myself time and time): Is this a dream?
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Though it takes me to another place and time
Feeling this great sensation of living and rhyme
A wild temptation and euphoric elation of chimes
A passionate and timeless moment and yet sweet and sour taste of lime

I will always cherish your gentle tenderness
From this day forward, my love for you is endless
Tears and sorrows of yesterday are painless
Yet, sole you are my only weakness!

Our bond that binds us is so real
Our feelings for one another I will reveal
My confession, my love for you, all wrapped in this deal
Yet, love in a mist-I will conceal.

Florence

Florence, "Love in a Mist" is so sweet. I need sometimes to work on this reply. Thanks for this beautiful poem.
Take care Flo. Sweet dreams..

chung_tuky